Friday, January 20, 2012

initial plot notes

this is a huge collection of stream-of-thought information i copied down to capture the essence of the ideas i had running through my head. this explains a lot of my work. haha

SPUNK

CENTRAL PLOT: protagonist has been sent to the reform school for apathetic behavior / lack of connection with teachers or other students and lack of participation in school, truancy. this foreshadows the rest of the game’s lack of focus on any sort of school work, despite being set within a ‘school.’

CHARACTERS:

"zombie girl": shy girl with Hermione-ish hair, glasses, moe personality, studies hard and works hard, she’s a nice girl you can meet in a local diner. seemingly the only ‘true’ anime stereotype within the game, actually sweet and easily taken advantage of and rewarding to pursue a relationship with at first. she’s at the school because her parents are shitty and thought that the reform school is a private school for girls / girls’ finishing school.

one day in a test lab attempting to take blood samples from an ill dog, the dog bites her and she starts to become sick with a zombie virus of some sort though this is not blatantly stated. her skin starts getting pale and bruised, eyes sunken, body starts decaying and she eventually rots while you’re having sex with her (nice options) or goes berserk if pushed over the edge (cruel options) and becomes a complete zombie. player must choose whether to attempt to put her down (you fail, and she escapes into the school and the ending features a zombie pandemic Bad End) or live with her chained in your closet until one day your lack of caution gets you killed and she eats you.


"diaper girl": dowdy girl with bright cotton candy pink hair, chubby (not fat) body type, is 35~ but wears a lot of childish or immature items – little blue bows and ribbons in her hair, frilly dresses and lots of pink and purple and lace. she always talks in an obnoxious baby voice when she gets excited / happy and spends all her time watching Disney movies and playing with children’s toys and stuffed animals. at the reform school for her infantilist behavior.

if you pursue a relationship with her, she is quick to call you “her man” and is very needy, always asking favors or whining. a defining point in the relationship is her farting the first time you are about to initiate a sex scene, making out, and your character observes that “it sounded wet” and player has a choice to either throw a fit about it and drive the diaper girl crazy with his nervous obsessions, driving diaper girl to mature whereupon she becomes a normal middle aged woman, or the player can let it go. if the player lets it go, as he moves on to sex, he finds out that she really did shit her pants – her diaper, that is; she likes to pretend to be a little girl and wants you to change your diaper.

you have only a couple of opportunities in this scene to determine whether you will be a part of her weird diaper fetishist life and one day come to wear diapers yourself, or turn the diaper girl into a neurotic mess.


"drug lover": if you try to leave the school grounds, there is a certain point where your character will remark to himself upon entering that “maybe I shouldn’t go past here… it looks pretty sketchy” and will be standing in front of the school gates. he encounters the drug lover, latino guy with black dreads, a wifebeater (green?), low baggy pants, and a luscious ass. this guy asks to bum a cigarette, where upon player has a choice to say no in a couple of ways, and he tries to mug you. security guards stop him, and you have a choice to press charges or let him go and get in trouble instead, wherein you get beaten by the security guards a bit and have to go to Isolation / detention for awhile. if the player turns drug lover in, drug lover breaks into your room at some point and spray paints snitch on your wall. this affects another storyline.

if the player takes the hit for drug lover, player will get a visit from drug lover a few nights later, where upon you have a brief, threatening conversation – either reject all future relationship advancements with drug lover or hit on him to establish the beginning of a relationship. if you choose positive options, drug lover will come to visit you in class and get you to skip class and hang out with him. if you venture out of the school, you have to grip his pocket like a prison bitch. he takes you to a couple of drug dens where you get to enjoy some funny bong scenes the first time and then some K-laced bong scenes the next time. The next time, you fall asleep and wake up ‘sore and aching all over, covered in sweat’ and drug lover also looks pretty tore up and takes you home, where all the other ‘youths’ seem disdainful or concerned about your deranged and beaten appearance.

a couple more hang out scenes with drug lover, then one night he comes to your room and asks for your help. you have the option to go with him or refuse to help and get all pissy with him for what happened to you last time. if you don’t help him, he disappears and you find out in the newspaper a couple days later that he was found dead in a gangland rape, terminate all events / interactions with drug lover. if you go with him, he takes you to a club where he’s let into the VIP section with you and a dealer is waiting for drug lover. you find out drug lover is so deeply in debt to the boss that the boss wants to kill drug lover. he’ll let him live if you both become his hos.

one ending features your new life waiting for drug lover to call you out to go get fucked in exchange for drugs so you can return to happy land while doping out all day in the reform school. the other ending features you trying to save your own skin or drug lover’s and wrestle away the boss’s gun, only to get shot in the leg and watch him shoot drug lover to death and then you.


"bro guy": bishie type boy with thick chin, J/O crystal around neck, blonde and blue eyed of course, looks muscular but is just big and kind of flabby, sent to reform school for fighting and being a douche. bro guy likes to do nothing but jerk off all day to weird porn and you can become friends with him through an opportunity to belittle diaper girl.

bro guy immediately takes you under his wing and hangs out with you all the time – really delectably stupid dialogue about not understanding girls, and social evolution and survival of the fittest. quickly you’re invited to jack off with him all the time, and the first turning point in your relationship is when you’re both jacking off and player makes an observation inwardly about bro guy’s tantalizing dick. you can choose to attempt to jack him off, and he gets really upset and tells you to stop. retrieves another crystal necklace and tearfully tells you his last best buddy left the school and him behind over a year ago, and now you have filled the void.

if you accept the necklace, you become his Jackoff Buddy and have increasingly homoerotic jerkoff sessions and fantastical bromance elements while bro guy repeatedly asserts that he’s “not gay.” this is featured in a bunch of minigames. your character continuously falls deeply in love with bro guy while also asserting that he’s “not gay.” Bad End with bro guy culminates in you supposedly hiring a transsexual hooker, bro guy’s biggest fantasy, to have sex with the two of you, but trick bro guy into sucking your own dick while tearfully blissing out over how gay you are and how he can never know.


"bondage teacher": heaving bosomed, red-haired temptress with Angelina Jolie look to her and skimpy female skirt suit, long red fingernails. teaches the only class protagonist pays any attention in because of her bouncing tits as she writes down crap on the blackboard. after triggering the event with drug lover and choosing to turn him in, her sequence is triggered in which the day after drug lover writes snitch all over your room, she sternly keeps you after class, and wants to know what you were doing wandering around outside the school. she accuses you of looking for trouble at one point with a very particular animated gesture, and this is the initiation to a relationship with her.

if player chooses appropriate options, teacher starts some raunchy flirtatious talk about trouble and asking what kind of trouble, and if the player chooses the right options (easy), she will not actually leave when going to the door, but will lock it and come back and push you down, tie you down to a desk with cords hidden in the empty desk at the front, and spank you with a cat o nine tails while revealing her crazy bondage outfit underneath her skimpy skirtsuit.

she immediately becomes fond of player for being ‘submissive’ in her perspective, and ensue are some scenes building your relationship with her over awkwardly desperate BDSM as she becomes increasingly demanding of your time and monopolizing. turning point in relationship comes when teacher tells you that she wants more time with you, all your time, and has hatched a plan to sneak you out of the school to be her hometime lover forever.

if you insist on leaving teacher after your scandalous relationship is somewhat revealed, she shoots herself, informing you furiously that she hopes you like death row. if player chooses to escape with teacher, the night the plan is suggested to you, she comes to you and chloroforms you in bed. player wakes up in a duffle bag in the back of a van, and teacher hauls player inside and into her dungeon, where she finally releases you from the dufflebag. you are surrounded by a couple of emaciated, haunted-looking adolescent manboys, and the teacher welcomes you to her “family”, turning on the lights to reveal every bondage contraption imaginable and no windows. you realize this is your life from now on.


"bipolar girl": Rei-looking derpy bipolar anime bitch with lumpy, skinny physique, pockmarked skin and constant smirk or disdain gestures. the only girl at the school who wears the uniform - it's not from the school. around 20. you see bipolar girl in the hall fighting with her locker, literally yelling at it because it won’t open and banging on it. player has option to either attempt to help bipolar girl or insult her. insulting her simply opens a topical branch of contemptuous dialogue, attempting to help initiates the relationship with bipolar girl. bipolar girl is often getting into fights with people because of her bad attitude and sudden mood swings and yelling, pursuing a relationship with her features various scenes where bipolar girl will literally get into fights with people or the player, and other times be obliviously sweet and concerned and vulnerable.

turning point in relationship with bipolar girl is when you try to have sex with her, she suddenly starts crying – player can ask what’s wrong. if player asks what’s wrong, bipolar girl turns to player and confesses that she is deeply in love with player, like she’s never been in love with a man ever before like player, and wants to be with player for ever and ever, and she doesn’t know if she can go through with this unless player will always be with her. seemingly romantic. if player acquiesces, turning point has been made; from this point on, bipolar girl is always on the screen with you, even when you go into a bathroom.

eventually, bipolar girl becomes obsessed with the notion that you are cheating on her and can’t be trusted, and bad ending from this is that you come home to your dorm one night and bipolar girl is on your bed. when you enter the room, she looks up, and spreads her legs and shows you her sliced thighs endlessly inscribed with player’s name while screaming “LOOK WHAT I DO FOR YOU” wild-eyed and bloody. she then begs you to fuck her while crying and you wordlessly accept, too enthralled with terror to say no. OTHER ENDING comes from rejecting bipolar girl’s plea that you be with her forever. your tone is dismissive and bipolar girl has seemingly broken up with you on reasonable terms after begging to be with you.

kicker ending is that if you reject bipolar girl, you are doomed – you can only get with bro guy after this because bipolar girl ruins your name and tells everybody else at the school that you’re a rapist etc.


"depressed girl": boring, plain, frizzy brown hair, dumpy, Betty-ish, wears cat jumpers and spandex pants, 30. you have the option to sit with depressed girl whenever you go to the cafeteria for lunch. depressed girl is indeed very boring – the difficult in building a relationship with her is initiating conversation, as depressed girl doesn’t care about much. you have to be willing to cater the conversation to the stupid anime books she has out on the table with her whenever she’s eating.

you can eventually invite depressed girl out on a date, and if asked properly, she will accept, which is the initiation point in the relationship. depressed girl’s date is on a Skype-ish program in the library, where you chat with each other through text even though you can literally see her head over the screen top. depending on how the date goes, depressed girl either wants nothing more to do with you or else seals the relationship deal with a kiss in the library, which you are reprimanded for.

depressed girl will have a lot of lame hangout sessions with player where she watches anime while talking to player and ignoring anything he has to say, or having lifeless sex where she lies there awkwardly. one anime-watching day, depressed girl tries to explain to player how she is feeling – depressed of course, varying symptoms of suicidal thoughts, restlessness, lethargy, etc, and based on player’s dismissal or understanding, depressed girl either kills herself or starts taking medication, encouraged by player to seek medical help for her depression, and ultimately you live together with a Xanaxed out zombie watching anime all day, feeling nothing and having lifeless sex.

Bad End is depressed girl’s suicide, where she explains that she always knew she was a burden and now at least she can be at peace knowing she’s not burdening her important beloved anymore. you have been implicated by her in this unintentionally, however, and are monitored constantly for being a total sociopath.


"sugar mama": rich girl, purple hair? pink hair? dresses ghetto fabulously, chick with hilarious animal print bullshit styles? put into reform school by her CEO parents for wasting so much money partying and shopping, hoping it would teach her a lesson – she should be hard to get, maybe. younger character like 20-ish also. different outfits all the time? she likes it when the character responds apathetically or meanly to her responses, acting pissed off at first but she actually likes ‘dominance’.

pursuing a relationship with sugar mama entails some nail-painting parties with her gal pals and shit at first in which you gain her favor by refusing to let her paint your nails and acting like a hardcore bastard. this is the turning point in the relationship – once her friends leave she demands to be fucked and tears off protagonist’s clothes – the protagonist has to act like a callous asshole to be successful in the endeavor otherwise she tells you to leave and the relationship is over if the character ever expresses the slightest vulnerability (3 strikes). This ultimately leads to the protagonist’s utter emotional castration as he becomes a meathead sex fiend like sugar mama wants. Otherwise the protagonist is made out to be a sensitive pussy with too many ~feelings~.

the awkward love triangle with bro guy features sugar mama, as bro guy will compete with protagonist to get together with sugar mama. character has to outdouche bro guy to win over sugar mama until he’s literally a muscular robot – Bad End if bro guy wins, protagonist watches as sugar mama is fucked ceaselessly by bro guy, pining after his heartless love. ‘Good End’ if you beat bro guy and you and sugar mama team up to be a crazy swinger couple fucking everything that moves as bro guy becomes your human bicycle sexually.


"financially fucked girl": FFG is a goth chick with pink dreads & tripp pants, furry purple top w/ fishnets. she is really bored and restless all the time, wasted a lot of money on goth clothes, and ran away from her creditors by coming to reform school. you only find out about her credit / money problems when you start dating her. talking with her is difficult because she has a slew of text about stupid boring crap (especially ex boyfriends) and you still have to participate in the conversation and keep her entertained. three strikes (boringness) and she moves on immediately.

when pursuing a relationship with her, the protagonist becomes increasingly obsessed and in love with the FFG but it’s impossible to keep her interested unless the character goes to certain lengths – two options, go out of your way to buy new silly goth clothes and roleplay the pants off her until she falls madly in love with you and you run away with her to escape her creditors, to live in a ramshackle apartment together in hedonistic slobdom forever. the other option is to obsessively follow her around and whine and belittle her and act pathetically needy until she leaves the main character.

Bad End features protagonist writing a song about how much of a bitch she is while begging her to come back, then putting down the guitar and staring at the voodoo FFG shrine full of locks of hair, articles of clothing, lame photos smeared with pentagrams and hateful symbols and a mirror with a decal of FFG posing next to protagonist in the mirror.


"derpy twins": derpy twins look identical except for their miscolored purple and blue and pink and green eyes. blue hair, dykey chicks with semi-incest sister issues. one is secretly a furry. they repeat the exact same dialogue and voice acting and imaging verbatim except for a few choice plot points. derpy twins hang out in the courtyard chainsmoking and hassling people. protagonist has to catch one of the derpy twins separated from the other in detention to pursue a relationship with derpy twins (you cannot only have a relationship with one – more on this in a mo).

after impressing one derpy twin in detention by ignoring the teacher and being stupid and harrassive, derpy twin informs her sister and the next time protagonist sees the twins in the courtyard, the choices for interaction change; derpy twins will talk shit with protagonist about other students and can convince protagonist to skip class and key faculty cars in the parking lot. if protagonist does a lot of heinous shit with the derpy twins, they start to become attracted to protagonist and fight with each other over protagonist. protagonist can choose one twin or the other or both, but both latter results end in a weird end where the darker derpy twin tries to kill the protagonist for corrupting her innocent twin, calling him a sick twisted pervert. this comes from a couple of separate special interactions where the derpy twins will approach protagonist separately, and the darker twin acts wigged out if you hit on her and mistake her for her sister. the innocent sister will correct protagonist but the dark sister will not.

if the protagonist chooses the dark twin, she becomes passionately entranced with the protagonist and basically completely abandons her sister, who becomes extremely depressive and passive and eventually runs away. ‘Good End’ with derpy twins features innocent sister having up and run away and dark sister lounging around adoringly, not giving a fuck that her sister is gone and supposedly ‘glad she found a better place and isn’t here anymore’; protagonist is suspicious that derpy twin killed her innocent twin and hid the body when noticing that both derpy twins’ shackles are around derpy twin darkness now.


"custodian": the custodian is the only person at the school who seems emotionally stable and secure in his sexuality, which is opportunistic bisexuality. he's an old ass man in a jump suit who kind of looks like a super perverted Dr. Venture, and can randomly be found sweeping in the background of some scenes with other characters and will occasionally make a lecherous face at the player at odd moments.

a relationship with custodian IS possible, and comes of rejecting other characters over time in the game. as the game would progress on a day by day schedule (day 10, day 100, etc) at a certain point, if you haven't connected with any other character, then the custodian begins to prey upon the player by interacting congenially in the halls, etc. since the player has chosen all of the options to be as apathetic as possible, the game determines that the player character is just a soulless blob and doesn't care what happens to him, so he's gonna hook up with the old-ass custodian man. he's not a bad man, he just loves blowjobs.


SETTINGS: player’s dormitory room, bro guy’s dorm, anime girl & bipolar girl’s dorm, sugar mama’s dorm, FFG and diaper girl’s dorm, derpy twins’ dorm, zombie girl & drug lover’s dorm, cafeteria, detention hall, courtyard, bondage queen’s classroom, hallway (lockers & other hallway), school entrance gate, drug den, nurse’s office, remedial math class, bathroom

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